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back to you"back to you” what common, and dangerous words. they could mean anything, really truly? like you meant it, sincerely felt it
is it a place I’m going? or the responsibility I felt (or you, for that matter) back to the same thoughts, the same indecision, the sa back to you
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bottles in the windowI see your sickness I measure out some drops, let you swallow them down but your facade is still, quiet and unchanged
open up the door there is nothing there just a burnt wreckage behind eyes, behind hair
I touch the tension on the surface of the water, looking from my flimsy boat it's too deep to swim but I let my hand slip down just beneath the reflections feel the cold, breaking me enough to add a teardrop to the ocean
the fountain that once stood here fades, the life evaporated a wall that used to di bottles in the window
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lying on the pavementface against the ground fighting for space and shock skin cut and eyes straight across as close to beneath the world as I’ve ever come
like a floppy doll with a brain registering everything, except something beating my skull something like pain, that is why I’m still here
gravity reversed itself and so we all fall down up into the heavens below confusing blows to the world-view now a broken bleeding organ
sound is louder here but no matter where, what you need to hear is always just out of range all the world’s a st lying on the pavement
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trying to tear the sky openlook around guess you see a whole lot of people following the photograph, the snapshot in their minds about the same day in a few years time where things will be more like they're supposed to
so did i miss something here? is the dream so stupid that it's just that a silly figment of my imagination somehow whittled down to a more possible reality that fits in with the rest of these pieces her life, his, it's a 1000 piece puzzle framed and hung nicely on the wall
but i want to be more than something that slots easily into the framework is it trying to tear the sky open
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age of unreason

Thu Jan 27, 2005, 10:27 PM

don't understand much. enough, at times. at others, reason seems to go out the window. at those times, it's quite possible to be totally and utterly stuffed.

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Current Residence: er
Interests: anything with a little bit of colour and anything subversive
Favourite movie: "amelie", "anastasia" and "sleepless in seattle"
Favourite band or musician: john mayer
Favourite genre of music: rock
Favourite poet or writer: no favourite, but rudyard kipling rocks
Favourite photographer: no idea. i'll use this to plug damien :P
MP3 player of choice: i wish i had an iPod
Favourite game: my own
Favourite cartoon character: patrick starfish
Tools of the Trade: pen and paper, occasionally keyboard and guitar tag along

Website: http://www.geocities.com/ylnoseye

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~BlackJack13 Aug 2, 2005, 6:07:16 PM

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THE TRUTH ABOUT JARK!

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what now? where do i go?

~allie21 Dec 15, 2004, 5:12:11 PM

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